Friday, October 14, 2011

Cyber Manifesto, Draft 2

Mostly Prum just added in all the endings and played with Sandra's first solo.
We realized that as he does more fun editing like the intro and Sandra's solo that it will be harder to move stuff around later, so we decided that Prum and I will finalize the timing together next week before doing any more editing....we'll put it up for feedback then and after timing is finalized Prum will do more of his wild n fun stuff!

Love,
Shy

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  1. Vote yes for for Post Natyam on November 8th.

    Who, exactly, is the intended audience?

    It would be fun the see "the body" as in the conglomerate post natyam group put together, although that may detract from the current seriousness of the piece. Near the beginning I see this with three of the members, but not all four.

    There is something strange happening with the timing in the vamp--in the current structure, starting around 41s, it sounds like Shy is rushing (and this is looped). Perhaps around minute 1 when the monologues start the separate audio tracks could be adjusted so that they fall better in time.

    Sandra speaks

    Anjali dances with recorded words, themes align, but visual lags behind audio

    Sandra mudras while speaking

    Cynthia has words with mudras, themes align, distracting because words are rhythmic but are not timed with vamp

    Sandra mudras while speaking, but cannot hear her words

    Shyamala dances with recorded words. Poor audio quality makes it hard to understand. Might be interesting to have multi-frame with additional member's manifesto dance video, especially since she leaves frame.

    Anjali yes hard to hear "community"
    Sandra yes to dis---???disagreeable?
    Shyamala infomercial turn
    Would be nice if Anjali had a "post" soundbyte.

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